Monday, March 30, 2009

Hydroslides

Clip clop all the way up the steps.I was ready for action . The green light flashed .I was off. Zooming down the slide.Swish round the corners. Zip when it came to the long straights. before I knew it I was at the last corner.I could vaguely see the light.I was just round the last corner then splash !I had made it down the slide into perfectly warm water . Clip clop back up the steps for another slide.

By Ben

1 comment:

  1. Lovely writing Ben. I love the description in here, I can imagine you flying down the slide!

    Take care to put spaces after your full stops when you are typing.

    Mr Sibson

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